Hey Mito! Everything looks good just a few things.

If you could put [blockquote][/blockquote] tags around ― (yagyū kikkawa): shinkage-ryū. and its paragraph so that it nests under kenjutsu i'd appreciate it so it is more clearly branching.

Photographic memory is actually unranked. So you are free to use one of your lower slots to get it (which means you can promote another proficiency to journeyman). You can either put mental enhancement (photographic memory) (Unranked) or mental enhancement (photographic memory) with no rank tag.